My poem for Oneshotwednesday at Oneshotpoetry
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I’m standing in front of this heavy gate,
hard to open,
hard to find
I guess it’s fate,
I was hopin’
the world won’t mind
I guess it’s too late,
expecting fortune,
I guess I’m blind
I’m in a desprate state
happiness? God forbid!
a rope to bind
THEN the TURNAROUND
struggle overcome
my spine is straight
return… a big amount
the black hole… a little one
nothing less than great
insufficiencies… not much to count
suddenly I can have some fun
suddenly a lighter gate
now it has a whole different sound
what’s it called?
I think it’s called happiness…
smiles. nice turnaround...nowwhat was it that made teh difference? nice one shot!
AntwortenLöschenthat's indeed a nice turnaround andy..and yeah...the sound of happiness is beautiful..
AntwortenLöschenI guess I'm blind... awesome. Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender
AntwortenLöschen"I think it's called happiness..."
AntwortenLöschenI love those moments when I'm blissed out and then come to that remembrance, oh, this is what it's like to be happy.
Great One Shot!
What a nice way to express happiness...I enjoyed it... thanks for sharing...
AntwortenLöschenॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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good that you finally found happiness :)
AntwortenLöschenOffbeat, clever, relatable/superb end-line.
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